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The First 15k
Want story-level feedback on your manuscript but not ready for a developmental edit yet?
This service addresses your first 15k words (~60 book pages) to help you strengthen your writing and storytelling.
Unlike a full developmental edit, you will not receive structural feedback (since I would need the entire completed manuscript to offer that). Instead, we'll zoom in and look at how we can strengthen your story on a sentence-level, paragraph-level, and page-level.
What's Included?
One-page summary sheet
Highlighting the main area that needs attention
This will be a pattern I've noticed throughout the manuscript that we can address to strengthen the story
In-line feedback on the story
Addressing areas like plot development, pacing, characters, setting, description, genre, and other story elements
Some examples of things we might look at are:
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Making dialogue sound realistic and authentic to the characters
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Writing vivid description that immerses your reader in the story
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Ensuring consistency in point of view and tense
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Balancing description with dialogue and action
Rates
$175 USD | $230 CAD
Note: rates are subject to change without notice
Save your spot!
Please note, this service tends to book out between 1-4 weeks in advance
Book your spot
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